IDK about outside the US, but as far as I know, suburban blocks are almost never designed with the houses lining the street on only one side. You'd normally have a wider block with two rows of houses facing both streets. It also looks like you have two razor-sharp right angle turns toward the top of the image. IRL, no city street should ever have that harsh of a turn, especially without being part of an intersection.
Imo you could make the faraway town into an island so it would make more sense as a "far-away" town realistically. Putting bridges between the parts would be good too, as walking mode it makes a solid map for DBD-like mode between killer and survivors.
it's from the game "omori", doesn't really need additions, it's already reminiscent of what it's meant to be. seems that the model was made by u/CaptainSulphur (reddit). the map is from gmod. (credit is always good) i've experimented with map ports before, though the only one i've really got to the state of show is violence district, which i also released. if the model has all the textures and they are properly assigned to their materials, a basic port could be done relatively fast.
if you have all the textures and the model file feel free to pm me on the forums, you might have to upload it to google drive though as last time i checked file sharing was disabled in pms. i'm not really a teacher though, so it'd more so just be me doing the work which isn't very helpful, but i'd be willing to do it with some spare time.